Asked The Red Dust (Seeking the Dao in the Seemingly Mundane Mortal World) - Chapter 1171

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Finally came the postscript link.

At this time, I always felt a collapse, and there was a lot of things I wanted to say but I felt powerless to say. The previous postscripts were not long. Thousands of words.

This book is especially tiring because it is the longest written…

It’s like running a marathon. The first half is always easier. The more the second half, the more tired. Every additional meter is tired, and this book has more than a million words… I really admire those who can write hundreds of millions. The macho, is too powerful.

I really can’t do it, just want to rest.

It is said that this book is indeed one of my best scores… Some people on the word of mouth say that it is not as good as Spring and Autumn, and some people say that it is more advanced than Spring and Autumn. Anyway, they have different tastes. This does not need to be disputed, but I am not very satisfied with myself. .

It’s not that there is no problem with writing, mainly, it’s not the story I originally wanted to write.

In fact, this book can not be regarded as a real upgrade flow, it is actually a travelogue.

As soon as these two words came out, I wonder if many people would suddenly realize that this is the case.

Many people said before that they couldn’t see the main line. Indeed, the main line is not very obvious, because the main line is to explore the world. Shenzhou, Nether, Great Desolation, East China Sea, North Nether, Heavenly Realm. Everywhere I go, I will describe the local customs, construct a three-dimensional world, and finally form the harvest of Qin Yi. The intricate lines are combined into the final creation. This is the real main line.

Collecting materials for Bangbang’s body is just a story line on the bright side.

It’s not an upgrade or a monster, so there’s not much fighting, and it doesn’t render much, because what you want to write is not there.

Although it is a travelogue, there must be a story to become a novel. What was the original story… In fact, Qin Yi was only used as a clue to witness, to observe the story of everyone in every place.

The original plan has many independent supporting role stories similar to Li Qinglin, such as Electric Mouse, Jingze, Gu Songju and Ye Bieqing, the infatuation of Yuzhen, the good and evil and the big wish of the mourning and the condolences, the plan of the Tianjizi… To expand to write an independent story.

For example, in the last Yuzhen, if you add more pen and ink to write a little bit about the story of him and his wife, and finally come back with some memories and kills, to highlight, the mood of emotion is definitely stronger than it is now.

But everyone doesn’t like to watch it. There is a high probability of scolding me for supporting roles in the process of bedding.

The test field in the first volume tells me that it cannot be written like this.

As we all know, the style of the first volume is very different from the later, and the reason has been said, because the first volume is not only scolded but also has poor grades-even now, every time I recommend to the starting point, the recommendation effect is the bottom of the same period. It is because the initial dissuasion is serious.

I trust my old readers, there are a lot of people who can’t stand it, let alone new readers, the retention rate of entering the pit is very low.

Because it is slow and not cool. There is complete deviation in reading expectations.

At that time, many people felt that the protagonist’s brilliance was overwhelmed by Li Qinglin, and the expected reading goal was to see when the protagonist slapped Li Qinglin…

This kind of reading expectation made me speechless and completely missed the channel, so I can imagine the impression I got…

In addition, there are a lot of points, the recklessness of the early Qingjun, the coquetry of the early Minghe was unpleasant, the “green tea” feeling in the early stage of Cheng Cheng, and the “tangled” of “dog blood” and so on. If you can’t wait for the character’s transformation or reversal, you will be judged as “very poisonous”.

Until a fire broke out, everyone found that the overall meaning of this volume was actually just storytelling, not face-smelling, nor dog blood abuse, but simply telling such a story, everything in the previous article was just foreshadowing, so aftertaste I feel a little taste… At this time, the whole volume of word of mouth was pulled back, but it was too late. The people who had left could not come back, and they could not see here.

This is a situation where the long-term foreshadowing is incompatible with today’s web-reading and reading expectations. At least my “spirit” is not enough to support people’s patience. I am afraid that it can only be achieved at the level of squid beacon. I am indeed far worse.

So I can only start to adjust the writing.

The outline story has not changed as a whole, but the expression has changed, which is actually a matter of pen and ink. Just like the first volume focuses on the expression of Li Qinglin, all of them are reduced and focused on Qin Yi himself and his women. There should be no pressure on what should have been “pressed”. If there are no twists and turns, there will be no twists and turns.

The meeting of Jingcheng in Xiaocheng Yinsi was the last transition point of style. It still continued part of the artistic conception when she first met her sister.

The plot has not changed since then, and the direction of emphasis has changed. The tone also changed from a little heavy thinking to a lot of fun.

Some people say that it’s greasy, there is no supporting role, too much emotional play, too heavy play, more like the early stage, etc., but it turns out that most people want to watch this because the results are indeed real After changing the pen and ink, it improved and doubled up.

In fact… as long as you don’t write the plot part of the male and female emotional drama, pay attention to any plot part, there will be the same impatience in the first volume, and some will even begin to approve even if you can’t wait for the explanation in the next chapter. Slight setbacks do not even require setbacks, as long as the villains benefit, a group of stubborn parties will appear.

What’s more, there are a large number of readers who are despised when decrypting the main line. I am also convinced.

But once writing a male and female drama, basically nothing, everyone is happy.

What you like is self-evident.

Since you don’t want to read supporting stories, you don’t want to write supporting stories. It’s very simple.

Some people may have said that after all, talking is a small part that cannot be influenced by them… but I can ignore the comments but not the data.

The subscription data for male and female main dramas is more than any other plot subscription data. You who jumped and ordered are not as good as scolding. You can scold in the chapter of the day.

Some people say too much about play terriers, but the excitement of each chapter comes from this.

This is everyone’s choice.

Perhaps it is also the inevitable evolution after the appearance of Zhang Shuo. Now on the starting point list, sand sculpture wind playing stalk wind has begun to occupy an increasing proportion, which is why.

In the end, it became the current “Ask Red Dust”.

Say I cater to readers, I do cater to readers because I want to eat…

If you feel disappointed to leave, you can only say sorry, even if you leave, you can’t see the postscript…

Of course, the current style of writing is not bad. The fact is that the audience is wider and more people like it. Many people laughed at their aunts, and I am happy, and I am very happy. Changed the style, it was originally for this, just relax.

The plot is still the outline of the original plot, the completion of the overall framework is still quite high, one round after another, one by one for the forehead to fill the pit, personally regarded as satisfactory, for a more networked day, I can do it like this A sense of accomplishment.

It’s just that it wasn’t the original intention after all. It’s a pity.

In the end, a volume was left, proving that Jicha wasn’t only writing emotional dramas and girls, it was considered to have been here.

These words are a summary of the writing process of this book. It has no substantive significance, and it is not to blame anyone. The question now is as good as Hong Chen.

Anyway, the net text is mainly based on public preference. When I don’t need to think about eating, I will slowly write the story I want.

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The second thing I want to say is a call to the current harem, I hope everyone will be more tolerant of the already difficult harem.

I don’t want to talk about the extreme negative brain defense and the party. I have been tired for so long. I hope these brothers know that their stabbing is really more harmful to the author than the priest who reported the party. Because the author knows what those people will scold, but he doesn’t know which sentence he wrote, and it was filled by the brain.

I can’t spend three or five times as much brain power, every time I write a sentence, I must consider whether the mount will be sprayed, and whether the two **** will squat together will cause any discomfort. Write a myth about the prisoner around the piano. mine……

As for it?

I really don’t have the mental power to deal with these things that normal people don’t need to think about, so that people can’t write.

I don’t want to say more about this.

When I was interviewed before, I said that the harem party does not have high requirements for works. As long as the girl writes well, many others can be forgiven.

I don’t feel it now.

As mentioned earlier, whatever the plot, the rational party logic party succumbs to the party, and it has no lower requirements than the single female without female works.

The requirements for the plot are not low, but the requirements for the characters are hundreds of times that of them.

I rarely see the character portrayal requirements in the essay without the heroine, but the harem essay…I don’t mention the portrayal of the heroine, and I often ask for supporting characters to portray. You don’t look at the supporting characters and ask… Anyway, everything is high. Standards go, no matter whether this is just a daily update, not a masterpiece.

Some requirements are really not up to the standards of even famous books.

For example, the hostess cannot have a vase, and one must be criticized. I think Jin Yong has a vase of Zeng Rou, and no one asked all the characters to be indignant. When he arrived at the Harem Net, he not only required female characters to be colorful, even the electric mouse was only a tool person, and everyone was dissatisfied. How can this kind of request come about?

Isn’t the heroine a character? It is a group of heroes for others to portray a few supporting actors without a heroine. If we portray more than a dozen leading actors, if we don’t write any supporting actors, wouldn’t we have portrayed a character?

There are also requirements that the heroine can’t be indifferent to everyone or hide in the later period. I wondered how Shi Jin Wu Song, who was so prevalent in the early days of the Water Margins, didn’t show much performance. How did he get to a harem web article that asked the early characters to be as exciting as the latter period?

There are so many character bridges, no matter whether it is a man or a woman, it is natural that after the wonderful paragraph is over, it will not continue to shine, is this not common sense? Is it possible to allocate a portion of the movie from time to time without trying to hide it?

We are really just writing web articles with several thousand words in Japanese. We are not writing beyond the masterpieces, nor can we have that level.

Can you not mention some requirements that exceed human limits?

Now that Hou Gongwen is so difficult to walk, not only does not see tolerance, but also becomes more demanding, I really feel very strange.

Let’s call for it~www.mtlnovel.com~ Be tolerant and peaceful…

Hmm… it doesn’t make much sense, and no one listened to my appeal. Some people said that I was carrying the flag in the harem. I hurriedly unloaded the flag. I couldn’t afford it. When I was reported, I dazzled like a target. When I asked for it, I held a magnifying glass, but my results were more dull than others. Several times lower.

Some buddies in the quagmire said that those who sell newspapers should now carry the flag, and hurry up to the past, thank you, thank you, good person, my pen skills are really not good, let the pen newspaper sellers bear this heavy honor.

I can’t think of more words in this postscript than in the main text chapter… It’s been too long to be true… Cough, the negative energy is too heavy, and it’s not too good.

I really want to thank most of the brothers who are still in support, or I will hang up.

Now let me rest first…

When I used to work part-time, I had a half-year break, but now I can’t be so capricious when I have to eat full-time… This time I will take a break of about two or three months (including the time for the construction of the new book). , October is more likely.

I still trust my brothers…