Avatar: Terror Of The Red Spirit - Volume 1: Mortal Development Chapter 23 Rant: Read

Just a quick note, I am not going to be nice. I repeat, I AM NOT GOING TO BE NICE. (If you like this story don’t read this rant as it is not aimed at you but the bad apples)

Thank you! Thank you! You have finally broken me to the point of anger…I was always trying to be nice and just simply present a story, an adventure, that was to please people and most of all please myself. I liked reading people’s comments saying nice things, I even liked people saying ”Thanks for the chapter”. Then these lame party-poopers come in and say things like ”This is when story goes wrong..”. Fine fine some of my ideas seem ridiculous and aren’t properly explained (because if I try to explain them you will get spoiled and then chapters do not have the same impact they had before). One thing is you don’t see the picture I see, I’m only showing you a small piece the size of a puzzle whilst I have the entire image, you obviously won’t like it until it’s all assembled into one picture but this story is meant to be a journey for the both of us. Don’t say I can’t take criticism as the shit they give me isn’t even criticism but plainly shit coming out of their mouths.

I am f.u.c.k.i.n.g mad! And mad! AND MAD! Because few of these bastards insult my work and my ideas and I will not forget; the bastards who mostly insult me haven’t even released one f.u.c.k.i.n.g novel coz they have No Balls to release their own novels they think they’re better and yet they don’t show it. MAKE YOUR OWN F.U.C.K.I.N.G STORY YOU D.I.C.KHEAD AND THEN UNDERSTAND WHAT IT MEANS TO BE AN AUTHOR! Authors put some work in the novels even if it’s shit they have to write words on to the page and also plan the story, even if it is a fanfic there is a lot of things you can do with a fanfic but also harder to work with as you need to understand the series and the characters; if you’re using the main character or cast from another popular series you need to imagine what they do in different situations and you need to make it seem as that’s what the character is gonna do otherwise it won’t be the same character that people know but just a look-alike with the same name and that’s not what the readers signed up for. E.g. You make a novel where anime characters fight in a Colosseum and the main protagonist is – let’s say Gohan and he acts very aggresive and wants to fight; people that know of him will know that’s not the way Gohan behaves and would immediately feel disgusted. It’s kinda tricky to be a fanfic author but it’s generally hard to make a good story.

I have been noticing that his site sometimes has arrogant sc.u.mbag douches smartasses who have No Respect! No Respect for nothing! They come to your novel and they just drop a shit comment because they simply don’t like something. Okay Okay! It’s not like I didn’t do something like that before…I read this dragon ball human something novel, the author introduced an OC character (and she isn’t a saiyan) and it was out of random and she was so much better than everyone and came to the same level as the MC who trained for years and she only trained with him a few years in a gravity chamber for 1 year and reached a power level close or slightly over the MC which pissed me off as this random nobody was introduced. SO I went to the comment section and vented my frustration saying ”F.u.c.k.i.n.g [character name] bitch!”. Then I and the author of that fic talked and before that he was also pissed about people complaining. Okay maybe I’m no worse than those sc.u.mbags but I show people respect and gratitude (e..g I thank you but your book annoys me) I will never let these f.u.c.kers who have not even tried making novels insult my work. Those so called ‘Critics’.

Anyway…I’m so angry, broke and filled with madness that I’ll – I’LL OVERFLOW YOU WITH CHAPTERS until I’ll change your mind you piece of shit (”Trashy attempt at a au fanfic” – Skepparn = shit). I’ll release lots of chapters so that I am going to prove that I’M NOT LIKE MOST AUTHORS! Some would probably give up after all this negative crap but not me.You have awaken not a beast but a psycho and I won’t give up until I’ll prove that I’m not your average author that you can mess with. I’m not taking bullshit from anyone and I’m doing what I want and I’m not gonna pay attention to your comments. I wish I can disable comment section as I really don’t wanna see shit.

If you don’t like my book, my decisions, my story, my character THEN YOU CAN F.U.C.K OFF.

You may say just like this one bastard, “You are insulting and threatening me”…YES! Say what you want, think what you want but simply I won’t be nice to you if you won’t be nice to me and other people in this community. I believe EVERYONE deserves respect and respect means treating a person as if they were a person (being nice – even if it is shit because humans should have common decency to treat people how you want to be treated). Respect doesn’t mean the Quality of your work, You get praises, respect and praise are not the same so don’t mingle them ([Webzayne] you bastard “you speak of respect like it is to be given out to just anyone, but I’ve been taught that respect is something to be earned.”). Try to be less mean about the way you comment simply tell them it’s bad and tell them the simplest reason because yeah people make mistakes but that doesn’t mean that they deserve such treatment where they are insulted.

Saying something bad about a novel in the comments section and reviews is insulting, I say from my experience. Whenever I see something negative it makes me sad, annoyed and makes me question myself, makes me doubt my decisions about the future of the novel and it feels like whatever I do won’t satisfy somebody but I want to make everyone happy love my story.

I realised that that is impossible that there will always be a d.i.c.khead that will stab you with his venomous words.

Some Of You Don’t Have Respect and Will Never Learn Of It as you’re stuck in your own shell of assholeness!

Dumbass: Great! I’m reading some shit about some shit author insulting us, randomly lecturing us and telling us what to do! Why do I have to listen to him when he’s insulting me!? F.u.c.k this and this guy!

Me(author): You simply don’t understand…You pissed me off and I’m simply telling you how to not piss me off and other people in the community. You are simply trash that thinks he can do whatever the f.u.c.k you want insulting others work and I don’t want trash like you here coming here anymore.

Dumbass: Hmph! I will and I’ll f.u.c.k the shit out of your comment section! I’ll destroy you!

Me: I’m already broken sorry and I will not take further damage. This is a warning that I’ll simply find whatever way to kick you out of my story if it’s to continually insult you everytime you come and say something bad!

Dumbass: You asshole! You can’t even take f.u.c.k.i.n.g criticism! You take offence to everything!

Me: NO! There’s a line between criticism and plain shit. I want to simply…rid of the trash.

(To The People holding Negative views on my novel, simply siliking it I would like you to f.u.c.k off and never come back please! 🙂

And to those that have not said a thing, thanked for a chapter, liked my comments, said some good stuff and criticisms. I thank you from the very bottom of my heart. Thank You! You are the guys and gals that make me want to spend time writing and finishing this fanfic as I love seeing your reactions and praising my work. I’m not even slightly angry at people who criticise my novel (that is if you say a proper reason otherwise you look like a fool). And also I am sorry you had to see me like this.

(Some explanations and spoilers)

I am adding more than one reincarnated person in this fanfic. Why? You say the MC then isn’t that special…true! But why be special? F.u.c.k special! Also the main point is that the main character has competition and peers, people who are equal to him this will make him more dedictated to reaching more powerful heights and without. You say it is a stupid idea Skepparn you shit but is it? Has anyone of you thought outside the box?

Also why add Chi Long? This hidden criminal organisation that can so-called destroy the four nations which in actuality was not to the Mayor was simply exaggerating and some of you didn’t see it which makes you dumb. I added Chi Long to simply be the antagonist of this arc and maybe future, but simply this organisation is named after the master of it Lord Chi Long who will be a very powerful opponent. I took inspiration from eastern fantasy stories and mixing plain fantasy to add more realism to his combat and fun like mixing talismans and anime card game type style together except this isn’t turned based.

Kuro is simply too strong as a firebender and has long surpassed Ozai and is simply getting stronger and stronger. I need to add an opponent that is very hard and Kuro needs to lose very badly so that he loses his arrogance. I hate arrogant people and don’t want my main character to be one.

What is he gonna do at the start of avatar? He’s gonna make it play out like before but he’s gonna go undercover to help out his family and keep them from harm. Kuro will also need to make Zuko set out and fight the avatar. Why?,,,To make it their relationship like in the series where through battle they had mutual understanding of one another and then fighting together alongside brought them closer.

What is Kuro’s goal? Well right now he has no goal but his goal in the end is to simply break out from his new world. Don’t ask why as this is one of the things I don’t feel like going into detail. I don’t like spoiling too much.

If I say the Kuro’s reason to break free, his mentality, you see… people in stories (weather i’d be in anime, manga, novel) they not only like to see how the plot progresses, the fights, the designs they also like the mentality of characters how they progress, how they view the world, how people around them react and how the character thinks and feels. That mental aspect is one of the things that intrigues people if some.

Sorry poor nice readers that were reading this.

To Sc.u.m I tell to f.u.c.k off.

Tomorrow chapter.