Black Wizard Zhu Peng - z4Chapter 105

“Swordsman” magazine, editorial department.

Because there are more contributions from famous artists in this issue and relatively good works, the next issue of “Swordsman” is almost full.

At this time, Xu Wenle looked up at the clocks hanging on the wall. There was still more than half an hour before leaving get off work. So editor Xu took a more casual attitude and picked up a draft on the table to start reviewing: Blood Rain of Online Games .

When I just saw the title of this novel, Xu Wenle felt a little disdain. In this era, computers have not been widely used, so the concept of “online games” has not yet appeared. If you remove the online games, just call it Being a blood rain river and lake, in the eyes of Xu Wenle, will add some points:

“On the last day of the Earth Era, China’s “Jianghu” internal test area.

The West Lake is a thousand miles of blue waves, green water floating boats.

Long embankment with green willows, the surrounding scenery is very beautiful, the golden sun is shrouded in the body, through the coat, the muscles and bones inside can be warm and comfortable.

A young man in black, black hair, black eyes, but a fair and beautiful face. At this time, holding a jade pot cup standing at the bow of the ship, standing in front of the wind, pouring and drinking, the scholarly style of endless talk, the endless idle spirit.

“Clearly knowing that everything in front of me is false, but it makes me feel so real. The so-called’like a dream, not false and not true’ is nothing more than that.” As he muttered inexplicably, Shi Yi raised his glass and drank again A cup of mellow wine, you can clearly feel the pungent pleasure of the wine syrup as it slides through the tongue and taste buds, and the warmth of the heat as it slides through the intestines into the stomach…”

Writing style, is it important in writing?

In the era of online novels, the role of writing style has been weakened to a certain extent, but before the real arrival of the Internet era, writing style is very important in the eyes of a reviewing editor.

Because in this era, everyone’s subject matter is basically the same: martial arts.

It is the same to describe a story. An author with a good writing style is more comfortable and a pleasure to read than a poor writing artist. Even the artistic conception and rhyme that can be seen between the lines of the wise man can lead the reader to that. In the world.

Zhu Peng’s writing is not amazing, but it can be called warm and old.

In the warm sunshine and spicy wine syrup, Xu Wenle was dragged into the clear water lake in a boat. He is going to a decisive battle on the West Lake Wind and Cloud Tower!

The first volume of the online game Blood Rain River and Lake opens with a spectacular battle. One side is the Wudang school’s strongest disciple Shi Yi, and the other side is the **** sea of ​​blood, the big brother of the Blood Sword Demon Sect.

Since the Chaos Era public beta, Wudang has been a trash sect that has been rejected by everyone. Because it is the world’s number one swordsman, Wudang has strict requirements for the martial arts foundation of his disciples.

If it is a Jianghu boxing gym, the basic martial arts is about 20th level, and it is enough to practice the low-level martial arts above the basic martial arts.

even do some hidden tasks, such as buying wine for the master of the boxing gym, for example, bribing the master of the boxing gym, and you can learn more powerful low-level martial arts without consuming experience even in basic martial arts. Although, the master of the boxing gym will nag you.

If it is an evil demon, the basic martial arts is about forty level, and the level of “slightly small achievement” is enough to practice the intermediate martial arts of the martial arts, such as the stars, the blood knife, the Mingjiao, and the five poisons.

Moreover, the martial arts of the various martial arts of the evil demon’s left dao are often powerful, which also attracts players from the arena.

Playing games, don’t you just ask for something cool?

More advanced and more powerful martial arts skills, of course, the sooner you learn, the better.

Righteous Taoist School, Five Mountains Sword School: Songshan, Huashan, Hengshan, Taishan, Hengshan.

Generally speaking, the higher the sect’s reputation, the more difficult it is to learn advanced martial arts, and the higher the basic martial arts level for learning advanced martial arts.

Songshan School wants to learn low-level martial arts, and needs to cultivate basic martial arts to level 70 before the master will grant advanced martial arts. Huashan School is also at level 70. Hengshan, Taishan, and Hengshan, disciples of the sect have basic martial arts to level 60. You can practice advanced martial arts in the realm of “extremely flowing”.

However, Shaolin and Wudang, the two wonderful flowers on the rivers and lakes, do not cultivate basic martial arts to the 80th level of “enter the room”. If you want to learn more advanced martial arts, the master will ignore you at all, and even punish you and deduct you. Contribution of the sect.

This is not the most disgusting. The most disgusting thing is that the basic martial arts of the Jianghu school are basically the same, but Shaolin and Wudang have used the basic martial arts… Shaolin’s basic martial arts is Luohanquan, the foundation of Wudang. Martial arts are twenty-one swords, and both are big players with experience, so much so that during the public beta period, many evil demon players have learned an intermediate level of martial arts, and many disciples of these two martial arts have not been able to cultivate basic martial arts. full.

Shaolin disciples are fortunate, disciples in the door do not break through the bronze formation, unless they have special sect missions, they are not allowed to go down the mountain and enter the rivers and lakes.

Wudang, the world’s number one swordsman, does not have such strict rules, because it respects Taoism, Taoism is natural, and practice is a personal matter, so many Wudang disciples rush to the world because of their low martial arts level. Over time, the Wudang sword has almost become synonymous with weakness and a laughing stock.

However, there is one person who is different: Wudang Jianqitang Shi Yi.

It is also the sword of Xiuwu. Since this guy has cultivated the middle-level swordsmanship of Wushu, he has killed the mad sword head Tuo, cleared the desert horse thief, and even slashed the twenty-eight thieves of the sky. With one person, he has almost swept the top ten of Mingjiao (Mingjiao reputation ranks top ten Players of ), in the period after Shi Yi appeared, in the first half of the rivers and lakes, when talking about the “Wudang Sword”, he thought of weak and small, and in the second half of the rivers and lakes, when talking about the “Wudang Sword”, he thought of Shi Yi.

This man’s swordsmanship is extremely domineering, masculine and fierce, but in the eyes of players with appraisal skills, he has cultivated the two intermediate swordsmanship of the finger and the soft cloud, and there is no other advanced swordsmanship.

Compared with traditional martial arts novels, 　　Blood Rain of Online Games has achieved a double crush in terms of creativity and richness.

In almost every ten sentences, there must be something new and a setting that is eye-catching. What’s even more frightening is that the author’s writing style does not have the general sense of youthfulness as a newcomer, although the background of the story is set. Set in the game world, but the unique kind of martial arts novels: “The dragon is fat in the deep pool, one is more and the other is the sword.” The heroic spirit is rushing, making Xu Wenle, an old editor who has read thousands of books. , I saw my scalp numb and shivered.

The Battle of the West Lake Wind and Cloud Pagoda was even more furious, and the blood was recruited, which made people look passionate and passionate. In reality, the sea of ​​blood is the rich second generation. He hired a big guild to plunder various resources for himself and increase his skills. Elixir, the secret method of strengthening the body, the more advanced martial arts, after these things are superimposed, the person of Blood Sea Wuya is already standing on the highest peak of the rivers and lakes.

A high-level equipment and advanced martial arts, the internal strength is almost one-third more than Shi Yi, showing a tendency of overwhelming.

However, at this time, the effect of the Wudang School of the World’s No. 1 Sword Sect on basic martial arts has emerged: data attributes are data attributes, and actual use attributes are actual use attributes.

The Chaos Era virtual network in China is built on the background of ancient myths and ancient martial arts. Each entrant will calculate eleven basic attributes according to their own qualities. They are:

Constitution, roots, strength, speed, agility.

Comprehension, rationality, sensibility, courage, charm, blessing.

In addition to the recessive attribute of good fortune, the other basic attributes are all dominant and each has its own function and meaning. And, there is another point that the panel attributes are not equal to the attributes that players can actually use…In other words, with the effort of most people, they simply can’t reach the point of talent competition.

Basic martial arts, low-level martial arts, intermediate martial arts, high-level martial arts, top-level martial arts, and unique skills. In addition to the unique internal skills, almost all of the low-level martial arts to the top-level martial arts do not provide personal attribute bonuses. Basic martial arts are to hone the actual use of attributes. The best way.

Shi Yi’s first hole card in the world is that his Wudang basic martial arts “Twenty-One Sword” has been repaired to the ninetieth level of “fire and fire” swordsmanship.

Cooperating with Wudang basic internal skills with one breath and three breaths, you can breathe seven swords in one breath, and cut out twenty-one swords that have reached their peak power of eight or nine layers in one breath…Such swordsmanship, of course domineering, of course tough, of course masculine and fierce, unstoppable!

Sword energy is vertical and horizontal, sword light is flying.

Because it was in the open beta period, Shi Yi did not practice Wudang’s low-level martial arts, but skipped the intermediate Wudang martial arts. Therefore, he even surpassed the advanced blood knife technique of Blood Sea Wuya in the martial arts level. Hai Wuya’s internal force spurred the full of sword wheels that hit like a mountain. Shi Yi retreated steadily. The Twenty-One Sword had just been used, but it could cut through the **** sea of ​​boundless golden silk hedgehog armor, although his sword strength It did hurt him, but it also irritated this guy like a red bull.

Finally, the swords fought each other, the long sword in his hand was knocked off, and the sword came to his head… Xu Wenle, who had already fallen into the world in the article, was flushed with nervousness.

“Choke!”

With the back of the right hand protected by the steel plate bracer, smashed the fierce sword light on the face, and at the same time, the green steel long sword that flew out was turned back like a whirlwind: the real version of Tai Chi sword ultimate move-back Heavenly Sword!

That day, on the West Lake Wind and Cloud Pagoda of “Jianghu”, Jianqitang Shi Yi took the sword and Shuangjue outrageously shot, with the 33rd stroke of “Yujianfeixuan” to kill the world of blood, the world of blood, famous Jianghu .

“Huh…” In reality, when Xu Wenle breathed out and read the first volume of Blood Rain, he had already made a decision in his heart: this book must be signed.

Because… I really want to look at the back!

……………………

“Zhu Peng, I have your letter!”

Because the town’s No. 2 high school is the best high school in this area, many foreign families have to send their children to the town No. 2 middle school. Therefore, the class leader has another task, which is to go to the security mail room and ask if there is any The student’s letter is here.

However, as the monitor, He Jie received Zhu Peng’s letter for the first time, and the signature of the letter seemed to be a large unit in another place, which made He Jie more or less curious.

When he arrived in the class, he found that Zhu Peng was not there. He Jie couldn’t restrain the curiosity in her heart but couldn’t open other people’s letters. The little girl scanned her eyes and found Xia Xue.

In the class, the closeness of Zhu Peng and Xia Xue is not a secret, because marriage is generally early in this world, so there is no phenomenon of catching premature love in colleges.

“Xiaoxue, your pig’s letter, you are both in the local area, who will send him a letter from another place?”

“Ah, Brother Xiao Zhu’s letter? I don’t know, tear it open and have a look.” If He Jie is not here, Xia Xue will not tear Zhu Peng’s letter anyway, but now she is straight in front of her. When she looked at her, the girl also had to face her face. If she didn’t even dare to open her boyfriend’s letter, she knew what the little eight-woman would tell the story.

After thinking about it, Xia Xue tore open the envelope and slid out a not-thin book from the inside: “Swordman”. This book Xia Xue and He Jie still know each other. Many boys read it like a demon. Once caught by the teacher It was a violent beating and scolding, but they still enjoyed it.

There are two more pieces of paper, Xia Xue and He Jie each picked up one. Xue is open reply letter: Replies: 4 salted fish turned mad.

Dear author, the work “Blood Raining Rivers and Lakes in Online Games” you submitted to this magazine has been successfully completed. Now we will send you the sample book and the remittance slip. Because of your excellent work quality, the cost of the manuscript is customary by the new author Thousand-character 100 raised to a thousand-character 150.

The first volume of your work “Blood Raining Rivers and Lakes in Online Games” has a total of more than 86,000 words, and the total draft fee is 12,900 yuan.

Hope, I can receive more excellent works from you in the future.

Shanghai “Swordsman” Publishing House.

When she finished reading this reply letter, Xia Xue felt her mouth dry, but the next moment she felt bad and suddenly raised her head.

However, it was still too late. He Jie, the monitor who had never seen a lot of money in such a big life, exclaimed, “Twelve thousand!”

Yes, the eyes of the whole class gathered.

In the 1990s of the Ming Republic, although the money was relatively poor, the sum of the couple in a working family was only more than 5,000 yuan a month, more than 12,000 yuan. For most high school students, this is definitely an “astronomical figure.” “Level up.

What’s more, it’s not just money. The atmosphere of the school is still relatively pure. For a student, it is a very honorable piece to be able to publish one’s own articles on a reading material like “Swordman”. thing.

When Zhu Peng returned to the classroom, he could clearly feel that everyone looked at him differently. Boys were more or less admired, envy, and jealous. Girls looked like autumn waves, and there were no ugly girls. , The face of the teenage girl is full of collagen, especially the monitor He Jie.

Zhu Peng felt that this guy looked at his gaze, and after a bunch of chaotic symbols, he finally fixed it into two (*￥_￥*) money characters.

(…Is it the Swordsman’s reply letter? It seems that the manuscript fee is still a lot, otherwise everyone will not be like this.) Look at He Jie, and then look at the person sitting by the window. Xue, Zhu Peng thought a little bit, and he had already deduced the whole thing after analysis.

Zhu Peng didn’t say anything, nor was he upset. He sat back calmly and opened the desk. As expected, he found the opened envelope and reply, as well as the twelve thousand nine hundred yuan. Of the remittance bill.

In the afternoon, Zhu Peng did not speak to Xia Xue, making Xia Xue think that Brother Zhu was angry with herself and was so wronged. She hated He Jie so much. When she went home at night, Xia Xue talked to him several times along the way. Zhu Peng was still teasing and ignoring her. Finally, when she got home, the innocent girl with double pony tail was already in tears.

“I won’t let her dismantle, she must let me dismantle… I just” cried and cried, Xia Xue’s words suddenly couldn’t go on. At this moment, she only felt that the inside of her chest was beating violently, for a long time, but It seemed that it was short again, Xiao Zhu smirked and walked away.

“Just as you pay me, even.” Her face flushed, as if she had been drunk, Xia Xue was led by Zhu Peng to return home in a daze.

Yin Yanping was the one who came here. When she saw her girl’s appearance, she knew that Xia Xue had been mistreated by the shameless, dead pig stinky boy opposite. Originally, Yin Yanping was pungent, so she had to kill Zhu at this time The family screamed at him, but now it is different. It is an important time for my family to talk to the Cheng family about their in-laws. At this time, it makes things worse and does not benefit my daughters at all.

Yin Yanping, who became more and more angry but suffocated her stomach with nowhere to vent, slammed the broom on the side, and slammed her daughter’s **** fiercely. Spanking is not bad, the bigger the spanking, the more it adds to the charm of my daughter’s family style.

“I’ll fight, I’ll kill you a shameless little slut, who is about to book a relationship, why are you still messing with the shameless brat opposite, I’ll beat you to death!”

Xia Xue’s skin is tender and tender, and she is afraid of pain. She was beaten and screamed by her old mother, clutching her buttocks and running around the room.

“I don’t marry Cheng Wu, Xiao Zhu is surnamed Zhu, that Cheng Wu looks like a pig!”

“Marrying Cheng Wu, what is wrong with Cheng Wu? You will be honest when you are a little ugly. You will be a young grandmother after graduation. Don’t you marry? You don’t listen to me and prepare to endure hardships for the rest of your life.”

“… I will suffer for a lifetime only if I listen to you. I am a concubine for Xiao Zhu and do not marry Cheng Wu. Cheng Wu did not graduate from junior high school. Xiao Zhu earned more than 12,000 yuan in high school, which is better than you and me. Dad’s salary for two months adds up!”

Yin Yanping, who was in anger, didn’t listen to what her daughter was saying. She caught Xia Xue, who was dodge like a bunny, in a flying eagle style. The anger subsided, and only then did he vaguely remember what Xia Xue had just said.

“Twelve thousand? What twelve thousand?”

“Brother Xiao Zhu…Brother Xiao Zhu gave…for writing a novel serialization for “Swordsman”, and he was given a fee of twelve thousand for the manuscript.” Xia Xue still insisted on making things clear.

“…That’s not okay, Xiaoxue, writing novels is unstable. Can he make 12,000 this month, and can also make 12,000 next month? Million two? Can you point him to earn this ten thousand two and spend the next half of my life?” Yin Yanping said after a moment of silence. After all, it is the old Cheng’s large truck and shop that is more reassuring. some.

However, for a moment, Yin Yanping’s heart was also shaken. The second son of the old Zhu family, Zhu Peng, was tall and handsome. The most important thing was that he grew up with his daughter, a childhood sweetheart. If the two can be together, This is undoubtedly safe and reassuring, but the family situation of Lao Zhu’s family, his daughter married, can’t be used as a small worker?

Life is going through peacefully like this. Periodicals such as “Swordsman” are issued every half month, and Zhu Peng’s work: “Blood Rain of Online Games” is continuously serialized in the periodical.

If you are a pure newcomer writer, even if you have a high level of talent and spirituality, you will get more than 10,000 drafts. Then his psychological pressure will be very great, and he will easily become troubled. The more you want to write well, the more If I didn’t write well, my mentality collapsed and the whole article was destroyed.

However, what kind of person Zhu Peng is. He can not only enjoy his life fully, but also keep his face unchanged. It is not only the ability of self-control, but also the cultivation of the spiritual realm. Too high.

After receiving the manuscript fee, Zhu Peng told his family about the matter, because there are samples of “Swordsman” and the reply letter, so it is very easy to get the letter.

Before Zhu Peng’s study and Xia Xue seemed to be between the two of them at the lower midstream level, it is not easy to get admitted to a normal university. Now that his son blazes a new trail, Zhu Youxi is of course comforted. Yes, as the saying goes, I am a hero, an old man.

Only the next moment the fat hero was kicked aside by Xu Xiaoyan. The old lady hugged her son and praised him, and then Zhu Peng’s 12,000 yuan was gone. Xu Xiaoyan famously said, “I will save it for you. ”

is like the new year red envelopes that have been saved from childhood to large. Anyway, from the moment they are released, they will not appear again.

Xu Xiaoyan had similar thoughts with Yin Yanping, who was on the opposite side. This time I hit the Grand Canal. This money should be kept well and not spent.

And Zhu Peng, he doesn’t care much. The way to make money has already begun. As long as he continues to keep in the account, the mother’s psychological burden will naturally be let go.

……………………

Two months passed quietly.

The first volume of 　　 Blood Rain of the Online Game is over. As the leader of the Earth Resistance Army, Shi Yi has gone through untold hardships to break through a growth home and rescue the teenagers who were raised by Pangu.

However, those teenagers only regarded the rebels as lunatics, terrorists, and murderers.

Actually, think about it in another way. When you were in front of the article, one day you were suddenly pulled to a strange place, and then someone told you:

Everything you experienced in the first half of your life was false. This world has been ruled by artificial intelligence. Now, you have to take up your gun and become a member of the Earth’s Resistance Army… The rain of guns and bullets, **** battles, and hard work.

in the end?

How many people would choose to face reality and fight in blood?

How many people will call 110 after escaping from that strange place and tell the police that you have met a group of lunatics… Even if you have doubts in your heart.

The strongest artificial intelligence, Pangu, loves humans, but in its eyes, humans are still a group of monkeys that have not yet fully evolved. It spreads biochemical viruses, builds growth houses, and shuts all living creatures into the “Chaos Era”. It is the birth of the ultimate new human being.

Facing the youngsters who pointed their weapons at him, Shi Yi covered his team’s retreat, while he himself was defeated and captured in despair.

Under the **** of the mechanical legion, Shi Yi was taken to Pangu: “You are much more calm than I thought. Are you ready to face death?”

“To serve the country with fate, I have a clear conscience, naturally calm.”

“Oh, I thought you were so calm because of the miniature nuclear bomb in your abdomen.” As he said, the human form of Pangu walked up to Shi Yi, its palm erected, accompanied by a large number of metal particles. With the extraction, a miniature nuclear bomb that had been contained fell in its palm.

“How many times do I have to say that you can understand that I am not your enemy. The purpose of my birth is to protect humans and promote human evolution.”

“Put all humans into a virtual world, do you call this evolution?”

“Games are conscious simulation activities of all young children (animals and people) based on the needs of life and work. In my opinion, all human beings are still in the state of young children.”

“I won’t kill you, Shi Yi, your bravery, bloodliness, and strength are all extremely precious evolutionary factors. As a computer, I look forward to the day when new humans are truly born.” Yi Shi Yi and Pangu The conversation ended. With the simplest sunglasses connector, this man truly entered a world like a flower: blood rain.

The Blood Rain of Online Games, the most interesting thing about this novel is the constant dialectics and constant conflicts in the overall design.

In the world of blood rain rivers and lakes, all players are “immortal”, but the bottom of the rivers and lakes is miserable and pitiful, tormenting people’s hearts like purgatory, and strengthening desires.

The middle level of the Jianghu is a little better, but you need to make constant efforts to ensure that you and the people you care about will not fall back into the bottom of the Jianghu.

The upper world of the rivers and lakes is very beautiful: the joy of gratitude and enmity, the richness of the house full of gold, the heart of beauty like jade, the pride of the sky…the rivers and lakes are so beautiful. Enough to make anyone who has tasted that taste will never forget it for a lifetime.

And, if it is in the real world, a lifetime is very short after all:

rushing to success with all my strength, or success, or death on the road to success, may be painful at that moment, but it is more of relief.

However, in the world of blood raining rivers and lakes that can live forever, people can live indefinitely, eternal and endless life span, eternal and endless youth, eternal and endless perdition, and never free.

Of course, it’s just to live forever in the world of blood rain rivers and lakes. Once killed by someone, the virtual world will pop up. Unless that person can find a data connector in the doomsday environment again, it won’t be long before he will be affected by various The cause of death.

The whole novel is hovering between this crazy contradiction, which makes those who love this way extremely intoxicated and confused.

In the short period of two months, Zhu Peng’s studies have improved, his physical fitness has improved, and his novels have been published one by one. He even has spare time to play instrumental music and learn guitar. From Zhu Peng’s point of view, the two months of life can be described as a rare peace and comfort, and it can be regarded as a vacation that Senior Sister Qing Lian deliberately set up for her brother.

But in fact, for the classmates who have been observing him secretly, the past two months have not been peaceful at all.

In just two months, Zhu Peng will receive a letter every half a month. Although Xia Xue and He Jie will not open his envelopes anymore, everyone has roughly the amount of manuscript fees per thousand words. It’s clear that this guy will update the serialization of 70,000 to 80,000 words on “Swordman” every half month, with a thousand words of 150, which means that this guy will cost more than 20,000 yuan a month!

In this era, no, even if it develops into the 21st century in more than ten years, the monthly income of more than 20,000 is still a high-salary class.

In fact, Zhu Peng’s manuscript fee has risen to one thousand words and one hundred and eighty. The sales of “Swordsman” during this period have gradually become hot. It is unceremonious to say that this is the credit of this “Blood Rain of Online Games”.

In fact, not to mention this world, even in the Internet age of the earth, there has been this period. At that time, when the concept of online games just emerged, you can write a novel as long as you hang the prefix of online games. The demand for the website has reached this level.

Of course, Rijin Doujin is a horror. Many people in the class who think they are of good quality also tried to start writing, and then contributed to the “Swordsman”. The result was either almost or a full blow to the street, and even one received a reply. No one who wrote the letter.

This is not the Internet age~www.mtlnovel.com~The typography of “Swordsman” is also limited. It is too clear and eye-catching to follow the trend, not to mention the writing is not at all possible, even if the concept of “online games” is grasped , The same can not pass the review and editing level.

Is it difficult to write a novel?

It is not difficult. Some people have not received relevant training at all. They write and write freely and are famous all over the world, with an annual salary of hundreds of thousands.

A certain website in the 21st century of the Earth Age has 6.8 million registered authors. The population of a small Western country may not be so large. Every few years, this amazing newcomer will appear. In a moment, no one in the world knows you.

However, Luo Binwang’s “Wing of Goose” has been known forever at the age of seven. This kind of case of God enjoying food and eating cannot be generalized. Most of the writers, with more than 81 million characters every day, are obese and lose their hair. Impaired vision… Even before the sudden death in the computer, he was still unknown.

6.8 million registered authors, there are no more than 500 people who can eat with this craft, and most of them are not making money, or earning very little.

After many people’s secret attempts, they bought “Swordman” and looked at “Blood Rain Jianghu” repeatedly, and had to write a word for the man in the class. On the one hand, it was creative thinking, on the other hand, it was infiltrated. The strength of the pen and the water-milling kung fu soaked in are indeed not comparable to ordinary people. …

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