Broly in the Marvel Universe - 24 Broly the Dominator
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I think it may be time to do my remake for this story. Reading that life of kai one has given me so many good ideas and your guys support has been very helpful. However, I have realized many mistakes in my writing style and I think it’s time to fix them. for example, Broly has a cardboard personality and no type of realistic life goals. The story progresses too fast and my chapters are too short. I’m very unflexible with my lines and don’t explain things well enough so I end up doing it in the comment section. Most of all I was too scared to divert from the original story. Not anymore though. And to you big nipple bastards that say that these women wouldn’t degrade themselves for big daddy broly. Just wait and see you fucks. Mwah… no pope shit nigga. I can say it cause I’m black lol. Also when I remake it the chapter title is going to be the name of [email protected]@
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