Dual Cultivation In Martial Peak - Chapter 85: Help.

I’m stuck with this fic. Help me. ;-;

I want to write, but with how the last few chapters came out, I kinda feel like I fucked them up.

Mainly because I wanted to give Mc a real challenge and have him actually take things seriously (unlike how he has been playing around in the world until now), and do some actual training, but I went kinda overboard with having 3 Transcendent opponents appear out of nowhere.

Now, Shan Qing Luo has been captured and Mc will talk to her. (I’m stuck on that part mostly) and how the story would progress to end the starting world.

Every time I sit to write this, I end up writing either one of my two DxD fics, the Black Clover fic, or the MTWAM fanfic rewrite.

Some people were also upset about mc being nerfed because of the drawbacks of creating a clone (which didn’t even cross my mind until someone commented about it).

He can make up for the lack of foundation and his strength would remain pretty much the same. The Dao he sacrificed doesn’t matter since he literally has thousands of unused Daos he mastered in his free time (he only uses like four of them—with the main being dual cultivation, sword, spear, speed, and alchemy).

The only thing I stopped was his ability to jump through realms (like going from 1st Stage Immortal Ascension to 9th Stage in one go rather than cultivating for it in some time) by: (a) absorbing and devouring a star source/or things that people normally can’t absorb. (b) or absorbing some heavenly treasure.

It wasn’t necessarily a nerf, but a part for him to truly realise that even the ‘mortals’ from this world hold a threat to him right now.

Mc will still be strong af for his realm, but he isn’t invincible (that was the point of what I wanted to write).

Maybe I didn’t make it clear while writing the chapter. Sorry.

So, I want to ask. How do you think the story could progress from here (mainly the Shan Qing Luo part and how to get close to her, and how to have her help in dealing with Yang Bai).

And, what do you want the starting world to have more, cause with it, the first volume of this fanfic would end. Reading your parts also help me focus on the fanfic more.

I’ll try to get back at writing this fic on regular basis rather than uploading in huge gaps (I’m currently reading MP for some motivation).

Thank you. 🙂