Life of Debauchery with Harem of Goddesses - Chapter 86: Decision

He guys, Indian Rake here.

After reading your opinions I have decided to heavily rewrite the current novel. Now it will be have a different plot, characters, power system with similar themes.

I apologize that I have to take this decision, but I believe it will be better for me as an author and you as readers.

I’ll now list what things I think I did wrong in this novel and that will be my main improving aspects.

First, Incest. Now I made a mistake of having any ‘action’ with MC’s mother and sister to be late in the novel. I want to change that.

Also personally, I’ll make it step-relationship so you can think of the relationship as incest or not, as the reader want. This will also done because sometimes I get weirded out by this idea, even if it’s fiction, but don’t want to remove this from the novel as many readers seem to like it.

Next, not using too much Wuxia in my novel. I think I made a mistake of making the world wuxia based which I don’t felt like writing. That was just to have it easy by taking heavy inspiration from wuxia novels and making it easier but it didn’t happened.

Next, 12000 goddesses…. that was too much from start. I’ll change it.

Next, having every woman to be virgin because of curse, and the problem that a lot of women didn’t worry about losing their cultivation while being intimate with MC. Will change that.

Lastly, I introduced mythological characters with the introduction of sins. I’ll change that. Either I’ll rarely use mythological elements or will base the new novel around mythology. Please tell me your opinions about it.

Also let me know what elements of this novel were untasteful to you or anything you would like to say.

And don’t worry, MC will remain a chad and alpha who will fucks goddesses, queens, gorgeous saints, demon queens, heavenly beauties, your wife, your mother and a lot more.

Thank you, till then please check out my fanfiction, Fate/Sun Gremory.