Quick Transmigration Of The Villianess - 82 Time for improvements

Alright I’ve seen some reviews and comments about this story about it’s flaws and everything.

So I want to ask my precious viewers who’ve been supporting or are supporting me now.

About Quick Transmigration of the Villainess.

I need to ask everyone is there areas of improvements that you could please mark out for me?

Please be honest I wanna improve on this story since it’s my first.

Do you think that my current writing quality is it editing or whatever, is the storyline currently OK?

Is there anything wrong with the story? I really want to improve to reduce the hate.

Do you see any faults in the story that you would like to address or things that you don’t like about the story?

Please be honest

Are my voting rounds annoying etc? If they are I will stop doing voting rounds every now and then if you guys are finding it annoying.

I’ll check this chapter every now and then to read about the precious feedbacks given by you guys.

Mini theatre

4 year old son cries

Hua yinyue “What’s wrong dear?”

4 year old ” My tummy is full but I want to keep eating”

Hua yinyue ‘ the struggle is real