Random Fanfic About Anime With A System - 126 Reviewing each other's works! 1/2
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After double checking,we [Messaged] each other,signalling we were ready to review each other’s works.I teleported to the 1st floor,Rindo’s floor,representing Hell.As I arrived,I noticed that the floor was decorated with red everywhere,with some skulls on the ground.We could easily teleport in here due to us possessing the guild ring.If not,even with administrative powers,you couldn’t teleport in here.
There was a pool of lava in the middle of the room,with 2 lava waterfalls,on the side of the lava pool,creating a dividing line.There were skeletons and evil spirits here as the monsters,thus following the theme of the floor nicely.
There were a fortress in here too,making the defense almost airtight,making this floor difficult to raid.Speaking of difficult floors to raid,we should make the bridge itself harder to raid,as it was rather easy,especially the second area.Instead of giving three tries,we should only give one.Hehehe!I’m a genius!
The floor guardian here was a Arch-Devil,called Mesphosis.He had two set of wings,with them being black in color,matching its black scaled body.Its Wings being about 5 meters long,with some spikes protruding out of its ends.
It had two horns,each on the other side of the forehead,with them having an evil and malevolent aura to them.You could almost see that the horns gave out a pitch black aura,sometimes entwined with Crimson red,possibly signifying its fire attributed powers.
He was a level 100 Fighter,meaning he fought with his hands in close combat.This was quite great as his scales naturally help him defend and increase some of his attacking powers,increasing his Blunt attacks.However,he does have a pole to use if the situation ever calls for it.
As for the background story,we agreed to keep it a secret,to surprise one another.We did agree on one thing, nothing weird was to be placed inside their background.Weird as in something along the lines of:”He/she is secretly a Bitch”.
That was our baseline.Anything else is fine,even if they were to have fetishes or what not.Well,not that the girls will do anything bad,right?I got this bad feeling but I decided to ignore it.I mean,what could go wrong?
Anyway,with that,I went to the 2nd floor,Erina’s floor.Anyhow,the floor did not look anything like Hell.Heck,there were food everywhere,surprising me.(Isn’t the theme for this floor supposed to be Hell?)That was when I picked up a ‘Donut’ on a plate.It then split into two,and then grew arms and legs and tried to eat me.
…..That was horrifying,a random ‘Donut’ turning into a monster,trying to eat you.This would definitely catch people off guard,not only that but there were traps in this floor too;Pitfalls,lava traps,water traps,quicksand,heck,there were even landmines in here!