The Golden Watch Of Hypnosis - Chapter 59

Hello there, it’s me again: your friendly neighborhood hentai writer with over-exaggerated depression.

Now, like before, I’m not here to rant, but I’m here to advertise and explain a bit about my now and only for now main novel called ‘My Colorful Brides: Choose Your Brilliance!’.

If you haven’t heard of the place where I got inspiration and the idea to write the novel from, don’t fuss because I’m about to fully explain it you guys in the longest and clearest way I can.

We’ll start from the basics this entire novel is based on an idea where the Protagonist, a (not) normal dude, who’s life is peaceful, but suddenly his daughters come up from the future and intervene into his life and try their best to set him up with their mothers.

If this sounds familiar and similar to you, don’t fret, because I’m here to say that the idea of the novel is copied from a manga called: Choose The Color Of Your Wife/Yomeiro Choice, a fucking good manga ruined by the author’s shitty character writing skills which I’ll briefly explain later but for now, listen to me.

The entire novel, however, won’t be a copy of Yomeiro Choice but will only copy the idea and, to a certain extent, a heroine that’s backstory will be significantly more important that it looks like.

Let’s see, I’ve had this idea of writing a novel on this same premise, A looooong long time ago, and I also wanted to spirituality devote myself to it, because you know what? This manga called Yomeiro Choice was the first ever harem manga I read and I almost cried after finishing it because I felt empty and there was no other novel/manga with the same premise or idea as it had nor did it have the slapstick or dry humor.

THIS IS NOT A FANFIC, BECAUSE ALL OF THE CHARACTERS AND SETTINGS ARE WRITTEN BY ME, AND THERE CERTAINLY WILL NEVER BE NARUTO IN IT.

You know, the main reason I want to write a novel on this idea and based on this premise is that I’m angsty and sad over how the author treated the characters.

The main character was okay he was the classic idiot that didn’t know basic female anatomy.

But the FUCKING PROBLEM I HAD WITH IT WAS THE HAREM MEMBERS, ALL OF THEM, INCLUDING THE BEST GIRL THE COUSIN, RAN-NEE WAS IGNORED FOR LESS AND MORE UNIMPORTANT CHARACTERS!

I couldn’t believe it when I finished the entire manga, that the first two heroines were neglected and barely had to say more than three lines and then, it was finished.

I didn’t even know that I finished the manga by the time I hit the last page and the app asked me whether or not I want to close the viewer.

I was shaken.

I couldn’t believe it.

Such a good promise but delivered broken

The girls didn’t have character development, they didn’t change, didn’t speak more than three lines in every chapter and were pitifully ignored in the last ten chapters.

I couldn’t believe it, I simply couldn’t and I became a keyboard warrior that day and spammed the site with comments such as

“FUCK YOU, AUTHOR, FUCK A PIG AND GET AIDS FROM IT! HOW DARE YOU IGNORE RAN-NEE. ”

You know, the main problem I had with the manga that they ignored Ran-nee, the older cousin of the Protagonist.

I get it, she was supposed to be the joke of the series, the blubber flossing idiot brocon who couldn’t do anything but spoil him.

But it hurt from seeing her being ignored because I always liked characters such as her and had soft spots from them.

It’s because I’m a very emotionally pathetic fellow, and get it straight, I never formed emotional bonds with any fictional characters but I did with Ran-nee, an ignored character in a very quiet and unknown series that most of you wouldn’t recognize.

That’s why I’m now on a mission to fulfill and better my feelings and to do that I have to serve justice to the character of Ran-nee.

I’ve decided, that in the novel, I’ll be making her the main heroine, all the other girls can go to the dumpster because she’s the best girl.

In the new novel, she’ll be named as Ayumi, which you’ll soon know as I’ve already uploaded the chapter of the new novel.

Go ahead my brothers, readers, and fellow one-star bombers, I don’t care if you don’t care about me or my novel. I care if Ran-nee or Ayumi will get the justice she deserves as the best girl.

Go on, do it, I know all of you’ve also faced the same tragedy before because who hasn’t? Who didn’t have their hearts broken when the best girl died? When she got stolen or was rejected by the mc?

Can you be sure that you weren’t as hurt as I was? Please, deliver justice to my novel and read it.

My novel’s name is ‘My Colorful Brides: Choose Your Brilliance!’.

And it has all of the best girls. And all of the best daughters from the future.

I believe all of you had that moment where you felt the emptiness in your hearts the moment you finished a favorite novel/manga, knowing that the journey is over and you’ll never see the characters again, simply becauseit’s the end and you have to bid bye one day.

I’m here to fulfill my emptiness, I’m here to fulfill that spot.

Goodbye and thanks for listening to my rank, I bid you good days to fall over you and that you never have to go through the depression I have.

Goodbye and read my novel.