Tokyo Gentleman Story - Chapter 1793
“In other words, didn’t we come to the hot springs, celebrate and relax today?”
After the discussion, it was supposed to be time for relaxation and activities. I went to BBQ in the evening.
But the actual activity was that everyone got together in the study room prepared for Morinia.
“Don’t say that, Senxia. It’s rare for you to find information for you. I have collected a lot of very good things here.”
As Qianjia said, she shook the red-covered data book in her hand. A set of four data books was very helpful for the creation of animation stories.
“But I didn’t expect that we would have to look up information from ancient documents.” Erika held a set of twenty-four histories in her hand.
Speaking of letter history, a large eastern country has a lot more information, and there are many third-party evaluations on it, which can be said to be very useful.
“Mr. Tanaka’s war works are all creative ideas from over there.” Morinka spit.
“I feel I need this.”
Yusu handed the book “How Steel Is Made” to Morinka.
“Well, this is good.” Senxia nodded.
“The second male Slein is Tonya, while the male protagonist Inah is Daya, and the female protagonist is Paul?” Qianjia said coldly.
“Well… It’s weird to say that, but that’s probably it.”
Senxia thought for a while, and said, “Slein is the childhood sweetheart of Ethelam. Slein is an earthling and came to Mars with his father, but he was discriminated against by Martians since he was a child. In his childhood, Ethel Ilam’s noble and innocent temperament made Slein attracted and made him strong. With the development of the plot, Slein will also become the Earl of Mars and live his most hated appearance. Seyram turned from a princess to a warrior…”
Moriha thinks this is pretty good.
“At the beginning, Ethelam was just a princess. She lived in a garden-like exquisite greenhouse, but as her consciousness increased, she abandoned her past life and ushered in a beautiful life.”
After finishing the preliminary information, Morinya began to conceive the outline.
The story of the first chapter is the interview and trouble that Morinya said before.
The world situation is getting more and more tense, the friction between the earth and Mars is getting bigger and bigger, and the princess, who wants to usher in peace, came to the earth to offer condolences.
Her Royal Highness, who is curious about everything on the earth, made one of her maid put on makeup to become herself, while she was dressed up in disguise and made a private visit on the earth microservice.
If you want to understand the earth, the library is naturally a more suitable place.
Then the hero and the heroine met.
“Why not arrange it under the cherry tree?” Qianjia suddenly said.
“what?”
“The heroine saw the actor sitting on a bench reading a book, and then couldn’t help walking over, and the two got acquainted. After a day of play, the princess bid farewell to the actor under the cherry blossom tree, but at this time bad news came… …”
“Wait a minute! I won’t mention the following content for the time being. How do I feel so familiar with the previous content?”
What kind of **** story and earth holiday is this?
“Ah, the use of the plot of the famous book is also very interesting.” Qianjia said with a smile.
“Rejected.” Senxia relentlessly rejected this strange plot.
This kind of plot full of sense of sight, Senxia feels quite subtle.
So dismissed.
“In short, the content of the first episode will not be too intense, but it will not be too soothing.”
It is not enough to be too intense at the beginning, because the audience’s emotions have not yet been brewed, but too soothing is not enough, because this is a “machine war” and not a Roman holiday. The audience will have doubts when they see such a plot. But the visual effects are definitely necessary. After all, there is no shortage of combat and combat.
Therefore, in the first episode, the “nuclear explosion” where the space city crashed last time plus the “nuclear explosion divine song” is naturally the most appropriate.
All in all, a big bang, a boy_meet_girl encounter, there is no problem.
As for more?
Then let the supervisor come!
Although Mizushima was initially determined, there are other candidates for supervision such as Hesen, Da Zhang, etc. Anyway, if one fails, just change to another.
“The first episode is mainly from the perspective of the male protagonist.” Qianjia approached, and the others saw Morika writing the outline and approached.
Morinia is not the type that can’t be written when people see it, so he just writes and tells his thoughts.
“In the story, the territory of the Mars empire is Mars, the moon, and the orbit of the earth. Among them, there are many fortresses in the orbit of the earth,’Yanglu City’ made with black technology.” Lu Cheng belonged to Martian knights, and many Martian knights wanted to attack the earth and expand their territory… The death of the princess gave them enough excuses and reasons for revenge…”
“And our protagonist Jiezuka Inaho is a military academy in such an environment. But when Jiezuka Inaho was in the military academy, he also realized that he studied medicine…Ah, no, the army cannot save people on earth. That’s why I work in the library on weekdays and enrich myself.”
“Is it true that Inaho’s favorite books are “Scream” and “Wandering”?” Qianjia asked.
“It makes sense. You can make an easter egg here. Inaho has these two books on the desk…”
Although she is a screenwriter, Senxia is also an investor and a half-producer, so it’s okay to add a little easter egg.
“From the perspective of the male protagonist, his world was gray at the beginning. Well, yes, in this case, even the surrounding colors can appear light at first, and then only the female protagonist’s colors are normal, so that Used to highlight the princess…”
The role of the princess is very important.
Although several episodes were dropped in the original work, when Lao Xu controlled the story, the original plan of the story was actually called “The Princess of Mars”, but it was a pity that Lao Xu went offline after writing the first three episodes.
Senxia’s approach is actually “restored” in a sense.
“Are you sure you won’t be beaten by the supervision?” Senxia’s comments were already too deep.
“It’s okay, it’s just an idea. Anyway, we have sufficient funds.”
The biggest advantage of Senxia is that it has less outsourcing and low trial and error costs. If new techniques can be adopted, I believe many supervisors are willing to try.
“Okay, continue to write the outline.” While chatting while writing the outline, Senxia’s inspiration can be said to be leveraged.
“Then start from the heroine part…”
Morika divides the outline into two parts, and the stories of the hero and the heroine are separated.
The role of the princess is different from that of Kaizuka Inaho. The plot on the side of Jiezuka Inahan is a gloomy rainy day, and begins with the princess coming to the library. But on the side of the princess, Slein followed his father to Mars to begin, which was a period of time before the story. After telling and introducing the background story from the perspective of the heroine, she shaped the character of the princess, and then the princess determined to come to the earth and let everyone “understand each other”.
Then… then there is no more.
The princess was conspired, and the second male realized that someone in his family was involved in the conspiracy, so he wanted to get justice for the princess.
At the beginning of the second chapter, the whole story entered a state of war.
Because the princess was “dead”, the Martians began to invade the earthlings, and the establishment of the area where the hero was located was completely broken up. The hero asked the true princess to take refuge, and he prepared to resist.
At the beginning of the battle, Morinia basically followed the original work. Although some of the so-called “witness fights” in the later part of the story are a bit subtle, in the early part of the story, such unpretentious battles are still great.
Of course, Mori Xia still fine-tuned it. Although they are all “standard equipment”, the equipment on Inaifan’s side is mainly against special equipment. Compared with the traditional aircraft war series, it is more like the position of the protagonist and the enemy. Come here.
——This is also the interesting part of the story.
In the machine combat series, the protagonist basically drives the special machine to fight the mass production machine, but in this story, it is the protagonist who drives the mass production machine against the enemy of the special machine.
Facing the Martian vanguard, the disintegrated Earth Army was unable to resist, but Inahan quickly discovered the enemy’s weakness and defeated it.
At this time, when the true princess learned that the hero was the Earth Army, she followed the hero and hoped that the hero would send himself to Yanglu City, and said that, “The war will end.”
Then, the actor instantly realized that the other party was the real princess.
What’s more, although the mistress is fine in disguising, the little maid beside her shows too much.
Inaifan told the princess that the war is impossible to stop, because the death of the heroine is a very good excuse for invasion. She may be truly in danger when she returns to Yanglu City.
But Her Royal Highness firmly believed in the truth, goodness and beauty of the world, and declared that there are many Martian knights who are loyal to the royal family, and the equipment of Mars needs the blood of the emperor to be able to open.
Inahan thinks that the princess is still too naive, and tells the heroine that Martians must have their own way if they dare to invade. It is possible to clone or find the emperor’s illegitimate child, as opposed to a princess or emperor with a self-will. , Those Martian knights may prefer to have a puppet.
And the emperor of the Weser Empire might be doing so because he knew that these Martian knights tended to be big.
The plot here Senxia has not yet unfolded, but this is a foreshadowing. Because of this foreshadowing, the emperor of Mars can understand the seemingly impulsive and mentally retarded operations.
Her Royal Highness firmly believed that this was impossible, and then she offered a new reason: She could close Yanglu City.
The first reason cannot persuade the actor, but the second reason makes Inaho choose to agree.
Although the heroine was “silly and white and sweet” at first, Morinatsu wanted to portray her into a person with her own opinions and ideas. It was just too naive at first.
“Huh, the beginning of the story is almost like this.”
The plot at the beginning is not too expansive, it’s almost like that.
In the latter part of the story, Morinka began to break away from the original work of another world line.
Although some of the plot itself can be retained, most of the story will need to be modified.
Because in the story, the earth did not act well.
After trying to get in touch with Mars, the princess demanded to stop the war, but it was deemed to be a “fake of the earthlings”, and the earth, if the treasure was obtained, wanted Inai to **** the princess to the earth army Headquarters, and claimed to help the princess end the war.
This time it was lively.
Because the Earth Army has no peace of mind, because they also need princesses with special bloodlines, and they know that if they have the blood of the emperor, they have the capital to make peace with the Martian knights-the abilities of the Martian knights are all endowed by the emperor , So they at least expressed their loyalty on the surface, but if the enemy has his own “authority”, it’s another matter.
Inah also saw this.
Inaifan even saw that the Earth’s hatred of Mars was actually set up by the upper strata of the Earth Army to shift conflicts.
Therefore, Inah used an excuse to decline the invitation to the headquarters.
The puzzled princess came to question, but Inah’s team was besieged by the Earth Army…
The leaks in the house are even rainy.
Fortunately, the Earth Army has a secret weapon, Diocalion. This is the trump card of the Earth Army, but it needs the blood of Mars Royal to unlock it.
Although Senxia didn’t catch a cold because of weapons of decisive battle, but… handsome!
With a battleship, it looks so handsome.
“Deucalion? Why is Deucalion?” Qianjia thought the name had a lot of meaning.
“Actually, I wanted to call the enterprise number, but I always felt a bit too playful.” Senxia spit out, “And to prevent me from getting infected, so that’s it.”
In fact, there is nothing wrong with being a beautiful business lady.
But Senxia doesn’t want to imply reality~www.mtlnovel.com~, so in the design, it is better to use some more mythical vocabulary. So Senxia adopted the title from the original work here.
Then there is no problem.
“All in all, the protagonist has his own battleship, but Inahan realizes that war is not dictated by human will, and a battleship can do nothing on the battlefield. Their greatest wealth is actually fire. Because of losing cards. The warriors of Leon have already realized the deception in this world.”
After continuing down, Miss Mars Princess finally contacted His Majesty the Emperor.
However, this is not a good thing.
On the contrary, the emperor said his thoughts to the heroine.
The emperor originally sent the princess to the earth to make the princess give up, but he did not expect an attack. But the emperor knew right away that it was not the princess who died, but the hermit warrior, so he began to act afterwards.
At this time, all events finally began to erupt in contradiction…